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Staring into the flame of my soul,
I vow to get even vow to get back,
Everything you said burns into my flesh driving me,
To vengeance.

Charging into battle, I scream,
Fighting the daemons of my past to prove I am strong.
Destroying the darkness in my soul,
Ridding myself of you,

Your putrid acidic words you poured into my ear as I slept,
Corrode my soul and tarnish my nature,
Twisting and bending me until im distorted and cracked,
Your blood will spill tonight.

Crying into the darkness,
My soul is cast aside, broken in two.
Unleash my fury, feel my wrath,
I will kill you tonight.

My eternal suffering is yours to enjoy,
But my revenge will be swift and painful.
©2006-2009 ~twisteddispair
:icontwisteddispair:

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Hey guys its me i know alot of you wont bother looking but hey! at least i got a post up!

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:iconxpoisonkiss:
And you told me the other day 'I ain't good with words!' You are hunni! And you know you are a charmer as well.
I love this. Write more!
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*huggles*
:iconnotafuckingartist:
you know angry masturbation is the first sign of a problem, right?
:iconohshit:
you should try writing stories man, this stuff is cool but it's always like an unfinished dream...it's not so much that I like it as that when I read it I feel like I just talked with someone.

Yeah that made sense! Sorry I'm not good with words Try doing something more with your words, if you want. I really think you'd come out with something great.
:iconquestiun:
lmao! I was just about to agree with this person...

this was so long ago, it is striking to me now that it was a come-back from you. :)

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-KD Anthony

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